Elza, D. (2009). in the eye  (of contemplation Educational Insights, 13(4).
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in the eye  (of contemplation
shifting (of obligations

Daniela Elza
Simon Fraser University


©Valerie Triggs

 

“Poetry aims to express by means of language precisely that which language is powerless to express.”

—Paul Valèry (429)

 

“It tries to tell you/like a mirror: look,/see, the sky/under your feet. Elusive,/

a dare, an inch/of water enough/to drown in. Everything/that happened to you/

begins here/and you could fall through it.”

—Sue Sinclair (52)

 

 

in the eye                 (of contemplation

 

 

it tries to tell you                 like a mirror

 

how to listen                past the edge

 

of drying up puddles.        past the edge of

 

an autumn maple leaf.                        past the edge

 

of a word

fresh

with fallen rain—

 

in the eye                 of the mind        pooling.

 

 

look                see the sky        under your feet

 

elusive                (a whisper of syllables)

in need         of attention

 

shriveled around the edges:         last night’s

 

words.

 

 

is poetry a pathology?                a dare

an inch of water

 

 

enough                        to drown in?

 

look                 see the way         rain     teaches

asphalt                of its depressions.

 

turns them                 into eyes

full of                 shifting clouds

 

 

(inside

 

memories’                 splashing feet.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

and you wade         through.

 

 

 

everything      that happened to you

 

begins here—                        the way

pavement embraces sky                              the way

 

you are drawn to                        this moment

 

of not-pavement

 

and you could                fall through it.

 

 

 

References:

 

Sinclair, S. (2003). Mortal arguments. London, Ontario: Brick Books.

 

Valèry, P. (1971). On Poets and Poetry from the notebooks (J. R. Lawler, Trans.). In J. Mathews (Ed.), The Collected works of Paul Valery ( Vol. 1, 397-429). Princeton. NJ: Princeton University Press.

 

 

Acknowledgements:

 

in the eye (of contemplation was first published in Poetic Inquiry: Vibrant voices in the social sciences ( SensePublishers, 2009).

 

About the Author

Daniela Elza is a PhD student in Philosophy of Education who poeticizes philosophy and philosophizes poetry, and hopes to not only bring them back together, but also to bring them both to bear on school reform and cultural ferment. Her interests are in metaphor, the imagination, and reverie. Philo-poesis not just as a practice, a more courteous way of being in the world, but as a vehicle for transforming consciousness. As a way of loosening our grip on the world to invite a more intimate connection with it, which creates space for insight and revelation. She practices everyday. Yes, it is addictive. Her work appears in both literary and peer-review publications. For more you can visit her blog: http://strangeplaces.livingcode.org/

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